ah, planning things out. the hardest part about being a writer/ animator. also i wasnt sure if you were serious or not about having a team, but collabinator can definite get you connected with people.
still, pretty good. getting your name out there and stuff:)
fun, challenging, and i didn't come across any bugs when i was playing it, nice work
pretty good monologue. no fuzzy noise, clear delivery, and background music to help the mood was nice. the only problem was the first 6 seconds of silence. i thought my computer's volume was turned down or muted.
Oh shoot, well I'll be sure to have the lead-in be a lot shorter next time. Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it! ♥
your audio needs a bit of editing try using this if you use audacity:
I cleaned up the audio using the tutorial. Thanks for linking it.
well, you got the voice part, of VOICE ACTING done. that's great! you just need to put more emotion into it. you gotta exaggerate to the point that your family thinks you are crazy whenever they hear you from the other room. crazy earl sounds like he was trying be crazy while also trying to be quiet. BE LOUD AND PROUD, MY FELLOW VOICE ACTOR. LOUD AND PROUD :)
I SHALL KEEP THAT IN MIND
that's how i'd imagine it being like
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